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Comment on How to write a synopsis: four big secrets and an example by tahmina

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Comment on How to write a synopsis: four big secrets and an example by Ness Rajah

Ness Rajah — Sat, 20 Apr 2013 13:06:04 +0000

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Comment on Japanese ghost stories: the yokai without a face by cristyburne

cristyburne — Wed, 10 Apr 2013 11:25:16 +0000

Hi, I can’t manage this from my end, but you may be able to change your preferences here:

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Good luck!

On 10 April 2013 06:36, Takeshita Demons: Cristy Burne

Comment on Japanese ghost stories: the yokai without a face by Janessa

Janessa — Tue, 09 Apr 2013 22:36:31 +0000

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Comment on How to write a synopsis: four big secrets and an example by cristyburne

cristyburne — Tue, 02 Apr 2013 11:22:20 +0000

Thanks Rachel! Good luck with the querying! Cristy

On 1 April 2013 13:03, Takeshita Demons: Cristy Burne

Comment on How to write a synopsis: four big secrets and an example by rachel's book nook

rachel's book nook — Mon, 01 Apr 2013 05:03:39 +0000

I was sitting at the computer last night trying to type a 300 word synopsis wondering if I was on the right track. Now that I’ve read your example I know what to add/delete and change. Very helpful. Thanks.

Comment on How to write a synopsis: four big secrets and an example by cristyburne

cristyburne — Wed, 27 Mar 2013 11:49:49 +0000

Hey Lisa,

Thanks for your comment. Re including your target audience, I think it’s certainly recommended. Reading through my example again, I see I haven’t even said how many words my MS is….whoops!! Including that info too, is recommended. But, rules don’t always have to be followed. A great story will leap off the page when told by a great storyteller. Still…if I were writing this again, I’d included a one-sentence followup: Beyond the Safe Zone* is a 50,000-word adventure thriller for readers aged 13 and up.*

Thanks for pointing that out! Cristy

Comment on How to write a synopsis: four big secrets and an example by Lisa

Lisa — Sat, 23 Mar 2013 18:22:13 +0000

I loved the revised synopsis, it was so full of energy and made me curious as to why Ari wanted out while Chase wanted to remain in. But in your “before” synopsis you mentioned your target audience. I thought it was a nice touch but never saw it before. Is that a new trend?